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Summer 2: English - Adventure, Lesson 14, 2/7/20
Summer 2: English - Writing, Adventure Story, Lesson 14, 2/7/20 - Edit and Improve
Summer 2: English - Lesson 14, Edit and Improve
We are coming to the end of our adventure story unit of work. This week, we have:
* Planned our adventure stories AND
* Drafted our adventure stories.
Today, we will edit and improve our drafts - so get your blue review hats on and let's focus on the following:
Spellings - Do they look right? Check in a dictionary.
Punctuation - Full stops; commas; semi colons; dashes.
Speech punctuation - Open inverted comma, punctuation mark, closed inverted comma.
Word choice - Use of synonyms and modifiers like adjectives to expand nouns.
Have you included the grammatical features from Mrs Parry's workshop videos:
Adverbs and adverbials
Go ahead and blue review to improve your draft adventure story.
On 3/7/20 - you will write or type up your final version.